by Softly
I liked your story very much. Now I'll read some more of them.
I want to thank you for the comment you made on one of my stories. This is VIC5
hi
nice premise.
could have a bit more added so that its' longer. it's the sort of story that is done well could have been several chapters long and worth the read.
in the end it was over to quickly and left you with the feeling of nice story.
worth a 5 start just for the feel good factor and the premise alone.
thanks for posting.
A derivative of Coming to America modified a bit. 4 stars. Only because the story could have had more development. Details about the relationship etc..