All Comments on 'Helping a Senior Female Colleague'

This story needs some work. You are confusing her husband as your father, and not being very objective about her in a truthful manner. This story could be an outstanding one, second to none, but your manner of telling is needs a lot of work.

Nothing makes sense!

In the spirit of the other two comments I read, this story, for all its potential, needs some serious editing help.

To post such dribble, as srewed up as it is, is an insult to your readers, and spoils what could have been a super sexy story.

Better luck next time.

You either got very confused when you originally wrote it and never proof-read it either OR worst, you took someone else's story and adapted it (badly).

This would never happen. You're probably a virgin

"Within 15 minutes of pounding my cock in my own mother"...

I'd get some serious help, Freud.

"She opened up one of her tits"...

And how does that work, genius?