All Comments on 'Helping Mom'

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don-donna2don-donna2over 18 years ago
Sick and cruel

Spanking breasts damaging nipples only a sick mind could dream this up

Not sure what it says about the mind that can get hard reading it

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
damn nice

chill out, it's fantasy

if you don't like it, don't read it

it was a great story and was very well written

I would really like to see another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
LOVED IT

Keep it coming, that was very hott!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Outstanding start

Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

Can't wait for the next installment, keep it coming.

submissiveMansubmissiveManover 18 years ago
Mistake to call his sister a slut

A completely unrealistic but exciting story.

IMHO it was a mistake for the author to attribute the word "slut" to the brother when talking to his sister in front of his mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
exciting stuff

Detractors will notice that the 'story' element is minimal, while the action is fast-paced and direct. This is an unabashed stroke (or perhaps swat) story! No matter how unrealistic this story might be, it is exciting in a way the reality could never be; maybe that's why fantasy beats (no pun intended) every time! Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Stuff!!

Great story. Liked the older stuff too. Looking forward to the continuations.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more?

Interesting that you provide us with limilar story line. A little unortodox. Will we see a continuation of Helping Mom?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What's next?

Great start to the story. What comes next????

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Need more

You simply have to finish of this series :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
got to have part two

I truely enjoyed reading your submission and can't wait untill I get to read the next part.

DaveAMDaveAMover 15 years ago
Great

Please finish - I want to hear what he does to his mom's nipples.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
To Be Continued

We are waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More?

I really hope you continue this some day. It's great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

?Great - please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I really hope you continue this some day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
please

please do more, i do know that im thinking of doing this too myself atm, thank you and hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

Can't wait for part two of this story, hope it evolves into his sister and Mom becoming his slave..

RoperTraceRoperTracealmost 8 years ago
One person's sickness-another person's fantasy.

I really liked this story, although incest is not my thing. However in response to don-donna's comment, more than a few women enjoy having their nipples clamped and tits spanked. Everybody has their limits.

AryaTheSuperstarAryaTheSuperstarover 7 years ago
plz continue the story. it's very good

I enjoyed the story.plz continue the story.i want to read what happens to the mom. How he treats her. I'll wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
We need More on this story

Could you please write another couple of chapters on thestoryline as it was enthralling. PLEASE NEED MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love tit spanking

Love to spank tits and nipples. Spank the undersides and make them fly. Alternate nipples slowly at first, then more rapidly, then both harder and faster until orgasm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Learn bra sizes

"... 40DD the last time looked at her bra), a thin waist" is virtually impossible. It means an under-boob measurement of 40, which is typically on a large/fat woman.

WilliamNeal137WilliamNeal137almost 3 years ago

Please continue this story. It is one of the hottest story I've ever come across

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 2 years ago

Why the fuck don’t you finish your stories there’s plenty more chapters to this story. That’s what pisses me off with you writers you hardly ever finish your stories, Especially when they’re five star stories

viciouswomanbeaterviciouswomanbeaterover 1 year ago

i cant wait to read about when you punish your mother,

after spanking and caning her i think that you should fuck her and then make your sister lick your mothers cunt

midatlstorymanmidatlstoryman9 months ago

Too bad you didn't follow up.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Second chapter mom gets involved. Third son takes control.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Over 2 years old. No second chapter yet. It would be fun to read, may-be a little different "action" then chapter 1.

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