All Comments on 'Helping Out a Friend'

by kooky123

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story a bit tame

Liked the story and the "idea" the wife had and her consent . The sex was a bit in out and away , she was missing intimacy and there was none . A little expansion on their time in bed and even a thanks from Miss Penny would make this a lot better read . Well done keep writing.

ErotonautErotonautover 9 years ago

With respect, that read like it was written by a 13 year-old who's peeked at their father's collection of Harold Robbins paperbacks.

Deep SoakerDeep Soakerover 9 years ago
Interesting start

This was an interesting premise, but then I felt let down. I cannot imagine that Miss Penny enjoyed the way things turned out any more than we did.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Nice idea

Think that he should have taken it a bit slower they had 2 hours he was there what 20 minutes. It was more of a quickie how could he know or tell her how she looks with one candle lit. Think he needs to go back and take his time kiss her body play with her breasts. Not just a poke and hope kind of sex. I know you can do another longer part 2 she will need another good screw.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 9 years ago
Could be better

You have a good idea for a story. It sounded like he was as horny as Penny. He was almost as bad as I was on my first time. Since he is supposed to be a married man, I think he'd have cuddled and assured her she was a desirable woman, then he'd touch every part of her body, driving her wild with desire before he flicked his tongue over her little nub, then use his lips to suck on it like she would suck his cock, (it's fiction, of course she has a clit big enough for this), finally, he'd finish by pulling her legs over his shoulders and slowly, oh ever so slowly, he'd sink his normal size cock into her willing cunt until their hairs meshed. Giving her time to adjust to a cock after such a dry spell, he'd proceed to bring her to a mind shattering climax. As they basked in the afterglow, they'd discuss how they could make it a weekly date

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago
A ha, moment.

What a good time to be a man. I agree with the others, more time to make a sensual connection. Then being the kind of guy who I might want to be, I return home with the rising sun.

Keep your story going. I personally am looking for this kind and loving story. I'm done with loving wives cuckhold hatred (immensely dislike) type of story. However they do deal with emotion and relationships.

Thanks

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 9 years ago
Just a couple of points

She is married yet is still Miss Penny, not Mrs Penny, why? A slender figure, small breasts and tight bottom? She has two children, surely she would have spread a bit?

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