All Comments on 'Helping the Handicapped'

by VeryDirtyMind

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Strangely erotic

I wasn't sure whether I should have been liking the story as much as I was, but even thought it was kinky it was also sweet, and I'm so glad that the Dad was getting off on his daughter's enjoyment and not a cuck in disguise.

I for one would enjoy reading another episode with a foursome that inclused the old guy's daughter.

RapidResponderRapidResponderover 8 years ago
Well done!

Like the previous commenter, I approached this story with misgivings, thinking that the story line screamed of "poor taste." I was wrong! What could have been awkward and indelicate was portrayed with compassion and sensitivity. Top-notch writing, VDM! ****

Dream59Dream59over 8 years ago
I must say

It was better than I thought it would be, or should I say I liked it more than I thought I would. It is a little rushed though. A little more backstory would have been nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic.

This story was wonderful and i was close to tears when I read it. Really some eye-opening materials I would gladly present to other people because of the sheer humanity that is described in it. Thank you very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

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"It's just that - remember Mary Katherine has only been with one man in her life. Me," Jeff told the older man. "I've thought she was getting a bit cheated because - well, I'm not very well endowed whereas you claimed that you..."

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Hey, I get it that its the storyline plot and everything, but surely a cute girl in a wheelchair gets hit on from time to time? Hell, I wouldn't bat an eye at flirting with a cute girl in a wheelchair and try to get in her panties if I were single!

...so far Im kind of turned off that dad is bringing some other guy in to fuck his daughter, kind of detracts from what should be the theme I think :/

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"So am I child, and may I say that's a sexy nightie you have on there," Van said as he looked at the perky looking breasts poking into the satin.

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...child? Guess he didnt listen too well, eh? Sounds like he's talking to a nine year old... Hey kid, thats a good looking baseball glove you have there." Rofl.

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"I told Daddy men don't like things like that anymore," Mary Katherine broke in. "I told him he could trim it when he shaved my legs and armpits."

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Hell, Im surprised daddy didn't volunteer to shave her kitty! Lol. ...and no WAY I would be bringing in some guy to have sex with her unless she specifically asked me to! No dad wants any guy fucking his little girl in general, you would think this would be amplified, lol.

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Yes, that's fine," the silver haired Lothario said as he looked back at her father who was nearly undressed, smirking at the revelation that it didn't seem to be the girl who wanted her father around to watch her have sex but was he who wanted to observe.

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...a voyeur and wanting to keep an eye on the fucker! ....no, I couldn't do it! She'd have to find her own date, it would eat on my nerves, lol!

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and while they were so small they might not be able to fill an A cup and consisted mostly of areola and nipple they were indeed erotic looking.

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I actually find that pretty hot :). Ive always loved small breasts and puffy areolas with poky nipples!

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Van declared in a stage whisper

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Eh?

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The smell of the girl's sex was as pungent as any the senior had ever tasted, and the aroma combined with the tart taste made Van lose whatever self control he had.

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...that always gets me... The smell hitting your senses first, sending a pulse right to your hard cock, like a dog smelling a steak! Then dipping your tongue in and the taste overwhelming your brain! I dont understand how some guys dont want to eat pussy!

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"Sweet," he sighed when he dipped a lubed finger into what felt like a keyhole, and he had to struggle to get a second finger into the girl who was wild eyed and clawing at her titties.

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Keyhole?? That sounds more like my wife though, tight getting a second finger in, mmmm.

But hell, if shes that tight dad surely didnt need to find some hung guy, sounds like its more for some weird fetish/fantasy of his, lol!

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Wow. This is neat," Mary Katherine exclaimed as the two cuddled up against her, and almost as if on cue they started nibbling on her breasts. "All my life I couldn't attract any guys and now I have two of them."

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Hehehe, I bet she's happy ;). ...kinda makes you wonder if dad was running guys off though...

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"I have an idea," Van said as he throbbed in the girl's hand. "We could get you ready, and then your Dad could have you. Sort of loosen you up, and then when he's done maybe I could enjoy you too."

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Rofl, thats a man really wanting in that tiny little ass!!

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"Van's rimming you honey," Jeff explained as he watched the silver haired senior burrow his face in his daughter's crack. "He's licking your anus."

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...wait, dads fucked her ass but he hasn't licked it yet?! Baaaad daddy, bad!! So he's fucked her ass once and had regular sex with her twice... And already bringing this guy in?? Strange!!

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"No. feels good. Weird but good," she declared as her fists grabbed the sheets before she let out a squeal. "Feels like a snake going into me."

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Kinky! I need to find me a girl with a really long tongue! ;)

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"Should I cum?" Jeff asked.

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He's asking Van? Lol, you'd think he'd be asking his girl.

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"Hurt like heck, especially at first," she said as she rolled onto her back. "Then it hurt good. Don't know if that makes sense. Then I think I might have fainted when I had that orgasm."

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Hey! A little reality in a story for once, what a nice change from all the ones were the guy just shoves it in and starts pounding and she just loves it from the start, rofl.

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"Even if I could walk I don't think I could."

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Too funny!!

Well ive gotta say, that was really pretty good! It didn't get too weird or anything. I was really turned off by the idea of dad bringing this guy in, but it was done rather well.

Thanks for writing, it was a fun read!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The story was sickening. I can't imagine a father so screwed up in his head that he would not only fuck hos crippled daughter, but would hire some big-dick pervert to fuck her while he watched, and then help fuck her himself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think u did a great job telling how hard it is for a handicap to feel like "a normal person." and not like a freak.

TipsyTodTipsyTod7 months ago

Handicapped people often suffer from an inability to have normal sex and over time that makes even the most dedicated spouse frustrated. They even suffer higher rates of divorce due to physical incompatibilities, forget the mental and emotional challenges.

You treated the subject with delicacy and care. Thank you.

I wish more writers would address the difficulties challenged lovers feel. Positions, restrictions, self-image issues, besides the usual morality barriers, all play a part.

Imagine being married to a woman for 50 years and never being able to have missionary sex. Or even fitting your head in between her thighs. A bleak prospect never considered by a naive groom until the night of their honeymoon. And if vows mean anything...

Iit's difficult to find aid(s) and guidance for living a fulfilling and successful life when physicalities prohibit normal mutual exploration, childhood rearing labels deviant behaviors, and ...

Never mind. Trust me, it gets difficult for even those with the best intentions.

Thank you and keep up the good work.

Tip off.

Fifty41Fifty412 months ago

Bsorry..

I'm not gonna bad mouth your story line

.or the why's and why not.i thought it was a great read and as a perv...as we all are...it was a turn on..I don.t write so it amazes me how you make everything thing flow so easily thanks a 5

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