All Comments on 'Henry'

Great surprise on a quick but enjoyable read. I had to admit I can usually see through most plot devices but this was superbly done I was fooled till the very end.

Nice twist and top notch writing as usual

You got me ... appreciate the twist and quick read!

GOT ME!

Hook Line & sinker!

Nice "O.Henry" ending. Still I didn't care for it much.

Your usual writing is far, far better.

All the way until the end I almost ruined my oil change, great story great job as usual

I can see why producers give it a name as a marketing trick (it's gotta stay in the mind somehow, right?), but owners? Then again, without it this story wouldn't exist!

like Neville Chamberlein fooled Hitler into that peace treaty in 1938...

NOT

I don't care who you are.

I must admit the humming should have clued me in, but I guess I was too close to the forest to see the trees.

But the restrictions that you put at the beginning made

it kind of obvious.... Good work though.

I was fooled. Very well done.

--well-done!

Thanks, ohio

PS I got it figured out but not until pretty close to the end.

I was fooled and never have I been more pleased that I was. Short and sweet. Great read, thanks

Even before the twist, this was one of the best cuck stories I've seen. Maybe the accent helps in the telling, but I knew it was going to be different from the beginning. I didn't anticipate the twist, and was only suspicious when Malc said Henry was probably on the floor. I gave you a 6, but Lit is stingy so they will probably only record a 5.

....dummies.Read J.T.Serra's story re "cuckoldry" on SOL or did you?

So I knew how it would turn out. <br><br>

When a story is labeled as a cuckold story there are several ways it can turn out. The hubby might be an unwilling cuckold and end the marriage. The cuckolding might have been limited and the wife regrets it and they reconcile. The cuckolding is ongoing and the hubby is struggling to deal with it somehow. The hubby is a willing cuckold and is licking other guys cum out of his wife. <br><br>

So I cheat. I jump to the end of the story and see if the hubby is eating cum out of his wife. If so, I don't bother to read the story because I find it anti erotic (yuck). <br><br>

This story was cute and VERY well phrased in many parts of of the story to provide a persona to a dildo. Nice job.

A good twist to the ending.

Thanks for the good read

Thanks for the smile you left on my face!

Just asked the wife closest to me if hers has a name. She asked, "Which one?" I learned she has three, Huey, Dewey and Louie. Should I be intimidated?

Your story was well done!

Thanks for the laugh!

What is the saying?...

I've been punked...

I did catch myself looking around the room nervously for any hidden cameras...

It was an enjoyable punking though.

Thanks for giving me an early morning laugh.

Fun read!

I was ready to turn into Harry in Va. and scream at you...! I wanted to yell nooooooooooooooo! I salute you. P.S. I was very slow on the humming bit. Until it hit the floor still humming.

1*

5 *****

Fun 5 * * * * *

I turn to a Britease tale. This one worked perfectly (and, yes - it got me!)

Sometimes those vibrators become quite demanding.

HA HA HA

You the man.

krjennings is quite the discerning reader.

I didn't figure it out until it thumped on the floor. I admit, I was a bit disconcerted at her cavalier attitude.

Why don't these stories EVER have the Husband say.."Ok Honey, I can see you are interested in something a little larger to impress you. So how about you have Leroy and I go and pick up one of those Nice tight little young girls who just turned 18 down the local?"

That's what I would do.. I mean Fair is Fair.

BUT NO...Its " Whimpsvill, Stopping all stations To Whimpsvill. Tickets please..."

I have been reading your stuff and came across this. Well, I won't read anymore. Fuck this shit of cuckolding. AT least you could have warned us.

that some of these guys have actually read and finished this story. Where do they get these ideas from?

I was wrong. I was angry I thought you were trying to write a cuckold story. Should have known better.

Glad you found it better

even though it was a trick on the reader.

.... 'Henry' gets a soul. LOL.

The fun part was not the 'suspense', (you gave away by putting a '?' besides cuckoldry) it was the way you played with the words. Nicely done.

It reminds me of 'A Wooly Tail'.

Thanks for sharing.

Bad Leroy looking for Dennis the Menace. TK U MLJ LV NV

You had me going for a while. Good story.

Me also. Signed: BTW

That had me on tenterhooks for a while. Don't like those stories at all. Liked this one!

Load of crap.

Better this time through. Pretty good writing, because I didn't like it at first.

Ahh no.

I fell for that one. I was almost reaching for the gun safe key.y

A very short time until it becomes real and she brings a real cock home. Another cuck story in the making. Cucks get one star,it is just too much in the press, the news and popular culture. Soon it become commonly accepted , Do not need more glorification of this.

You write like a horny hormonal teenager !!

LOL I was hooked

I'm lost as a reader.... Not my cup of tea.... Hate cuckoldry in any shape and form or implied...

Nice one. You did fool me until the humming part at the end.

5*.