All Comments on 'Her Brother's Child Pt. 02'

Can't wait for the next chapter

We need a continuation of this one with them beginning a sibling for this first baby, again with her husband thinking the baby is his.

I love this story. Please continue writing more on these two characters! The primal lust and passion between them is amazing. The animalistic need these two have for each other makes me very hot and bothered in a good way.

it's a good time for her to leave she could go to a lawyer and claim cruelty against jack and get a divorce and move in with her brother you never said if the brother was still married or not but she could still move in so he could care for her

You capture the lust between these two perfectly. I can feel and taste it. Very nicely done.

You're taking entirely too long to continue on with this story. It's good...don't let it simmer...your readers will definitely loose interest.

Thank God you stopped this awful thing your writing