by dglaurenson
The plot thickens. Her antagonist is well described, by her memory. The bar scene was unexpected and exciting. The regular acted weirdly with the collar and leash, but his taking of her was expected as a demonstration for the taped fellow. The scene of her/she (?) and Opie is in keeping with her talents. Again, well written and the plot widens. I expected even more bizarre activity in the next chapter.