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All Comments on 'Her Dominate Night'

by redheaddom

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HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersover 13 years ago
Look it up

Please check the dictionary and learn the difference between DOMINATE and DOMINANT. Sorry if I sound picky, but so many "writers" haven't been able to figure that one out.

redheaddomredheaddomover 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you..

Thank you for all the kind votes on this story. It was my first story. I appreciate all input, so please leave a comment so I can learn and grow with my writing. Thank you again.

Redheaddom

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Disjointed and difficult to read

Either a good editor or a re-write.

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