All Comments on 'Her First Time'

I would, regretfully, repeat the comment about 'to' and 'too'.

I would however like to know if the choice of the name Yuri is just a coincidence as, in Japanese, Yuri is the term used for lesbian or 'girl-on-girl' sex?

It was a good story. Its not a book so therfore people who are criticizing you about grammer need to shut up. If they want it grammatically correct they sould write their own story. Your story was sexy and just freaken awesome.

People who complain about spelling and grammer really need to get a life, your story was amazing and sexy. it reminds me of my first time, thank you for sharing.

The Karen Charactor sounded amazing... yummy.

ANyway, those who come here to take the piss out of spelling, are idiots. spend most of hteir time with one hand on the keyboard, you get the idea...

Thanks again.

An Old Friend

That was so hot.