All Comments on 'her Heart Ch. 04'

I didn't read this story. It wasn't necessary to read it to figure out the writer deserved the lowest possible scores. If a "writer" can't properly capitalize the first word in the title, he has no business submitting to this website. Where's the quality control at Lit these days?

Real smart constructive comment muppet

have you not got the guts to do it openly

Teddy dearest don't you love these brave people

that hide behind 'anonymity'

love you teddy love the story

p.s. Peabrain, the story is written within

the concept of BDSM where capitalisation

is classed as a form of respect

Alan xxx

I would like to address two parties with this comment, first cuddly one <smile> wonderful story it flows well and talks of a happy beginning from what was close to a tragic story, and an opening that many that have felt the pain in the first three chapters had wished for at the time, now the second part is directed to "anonymous" first off do not critique if you do not even have the courage to show your face, and secondly if you do not even know how the capitol letters in BDSM are relevant to a story you might want to stay away from the BDSM section until you learn what it is about the only other advice I can give you, buy a vowel because you don't have a clue. P. S. thanks Alan for the support of My cuddly one