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by MorgaineLaFay

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JBmanly50JBmanly50over 19 years ago
Not erotic, but very sensual indeed

I feel almost stupid for having read three of your stories and being the first to comment on each. Your writing is consistant. There is a definite style that you use that has captivated me. The imagery is perfect allowing me me paint a picture in my mind.

I have no idea how old this person is, but it doesn't matter. She could be old or relatively young. She could be ugly (for many 'ugly' people are the most beautiful) or attractive. Hints of tragedy and urning. I'm probably bias but it touched me emotionally. Thank you again MorgaineLaFay.

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I am the rain on a stormy night. I am the howling of the wind that calls out. I am the bolts of lightening that dances across your sky. I am the rage inside the sea. I am the wind that whips along dark beaches and whispers to you at night. I am the salt on your skin.