All Comments on 'Her Mystery Lover'

You asked for help. I was expecting a complete stranger to get into the house somehow, and anally rape her which she discovers she likes. These people seem to know each other well, he is not a mysterious stranger. Kind of misleading.

I thought that your story was very good but I too expected for the lover to be a complete stranger. It would have added to the story a little more. Also I noticed quite a few grammar errors. You might want to enlist the help of an editor for your next story. I loved the use of multiple toys as well. Very good effort! Made Hot and Horny.

i wish this was me!. obviously this was not the first time those two had been together but that is hot that she never gets to see who it is.

I thank everyone for the comments. I will never get any better as a writer unless you, the reader, tell me why you either like or dislike my stories. I read and take into consideration every comment and feedback which I receive.

Just a note, when I write these stories, I get just as horny writing them as you do reading them. Sometimes, that results in miss-spelled words, and some grammar errors. Please forgive me.

wishing I was her