All Comments on 'Her Open Invitation'

Simply outstanding. This story is absoutely perfect!

Wow, this was amazing!!! More please, I want more! So, so good. I love the interaction between the two of them! Well written!

Just not my proverbial cup of coffee. The women in my life, since my first girlfriend, have always called me "a Sweetheart", and I just don't go for the rougher aspect of lovemaking.

But that's just me.

Well written, again.

Great story. Continue this please

I love this one Mister_ Shy. Every time I read it I come so hard. It's sooo good. I want more. Please?

Thanks. I wanted to try something a little different with this one. Glad you stuck with it and thanks for reading.

Sheesh... tough crowd sweating the small stuff. Yeah, I was confused about the first paragraph, too. But - the rest of story is hot. The description of her breasts is great, and the office scene is a real turn-on.

"There was never any confusion about their relationship."

There sure was about your use of English.

Is Dillion his own protege?

After that start I decided not to finish.

To be fair, I didn't give it a score either.

Get it right a female student is "coed" and mixed male/female group of students is "co-ed".