by SwitchMami
I loved it. The story is written well and gets you lost in it. Cannot wait to read more.
God, that was hot! Great story - please do a sequel!
Think he should treat her right and get back to tasting that sweet full ass of hers in the end, love your sense of detail
I feel like there was something missing.... oh yes... aplot... They just jumped right in didnt they...lol no setting the scene for you
there, but it's subtle. His treatment of her, giving her what she desired, that's the plot, really. It's just not a deep one.
I do plan on collaborating again with FunFilled80 to do a sequel for this story, and include some background in their relationship. I wrongly had this set for another section, it's actually based on the Daddy fetish, not an incestuous relationship. Please, continue to give feedback; it can only make me a better writer and make my stories more enjoyable!
I do take requests, within reason. It may take time, as i am a full time employed single mother, but i love writing!
Thanks to you all who have commented and voted so far!
Loved the story. Please write more stories like this had me stroking my cock until I shot my lot.
Mike