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by maxex5452

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ummm

I liked it, but as I have seen the first season of Heroes, I can't say I like the name Sylar all that much! Definitely finish this one though!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 16 years ago
oooh!

Finish it please!!

The_PedantThe_Pedantover 6 years ago
Grammar.

"He was a friend of the family's and I also treated him good, and I helped him out whenever I could, so he owed me. "

I treated him WELL, not GOOD.

"Well" and "good" are not synonymous

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Another unfinished story

Last entry was 2011.. so don't bother 😡

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