by NYCSeparatedWM50
I too lived in NYC . I used to work nights and during down time my favorite thing to do was to check out what the locals were up too. I have seen many couples fucking and more than a few women putting their whole bodies on display knowing damm well i was looking.
Enjoyed the twists, the way it unfolded, as if the author was confiding in me. And, it left me hot and bothered...the way a good story should!
It's always nice to read a story that's different. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, but the ending was good. I tried to vote a 5, but there must be a glitch in the system as voting isn't working. Glad I caught the story in the New Story list. Great writing!
This may just be personal preference, but I like a bit less story and a lot more focus and detail to the "action". This felt a tad unbalanced- but it was certainly worth the read! I'd love to see a sequel.