All Comments on 'High School Romance Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
aw

im so glad that ezra spoke!!! cant wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW!!!!!!

I Love this story as well as your others!!!! Please let there be more!!!! Can't wait!!!!!!!!

woman3450woman3450over 13 years ago
Beautiful!

This story goes right to my heart. Love it. Hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
YAY!! :)

Ezra spoke!!! I'm so happy! Can't wait for more from you :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MORE

HURRY! WE ARE DYING OF WAITING FOR CH. 4

GweallGweallover 13 years ago
PLEASEEEEE!

MORE PLEASE! I'm begging here!!! PLEASEEEE dont leave us hanging for long this story is amazing keep up the good work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Its fucking awesome! The romance is pure bliss!

lexvenelexveneover 13 years ago
this cant be the end

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! i wasnt dissappointed in the least, wow...waitin for ch 4!!!!!!!! keep up the good work

kitten2010kitten2010over 13 years agoAuthor

To all of you waiting for the next chapter, don't worry. There are actually two more chapters completed and awaiting approval. I have no idea why Ch. 04 is taking so long, but don't worry, I haven't stopped writing it :)

pwr2theblondespwr2theblondesover 13 years ago
Amazing

So romantic and hot.

Kazehana552Kazehana552about 13 years ago

So cute how Brady washed him. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Great story so far, Kitten. Love Brady and Ezra but know Paul is going to hurt them.

hadesspawn27hadesspawn27almost 12 years ago

(if you feel dirty I'll make you clean) that line is one of the most romantic things I have ever heard love this serirs so much

wilnardwilnardover 11 years ago
Ok I admit I'm a bit slow

Ok I'm kinda slow n I'm lost. Did something happen to Ezra the reason being y he cnt talk?

WittePietWittePietabout 11 years ago
Thank you...

...for an amazing sweet story. I loved every word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wilnard,

Trauma from all the abuse can cause someone to shut themself that badly. I don't think he can't speak at all, but it's been so long that he thinks that it's better for him to not speak.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You write wonderfully, creating the right atmosphere and showing the individual personalities of the characters in this story. Unfortunately, as usual in this romantic world, there will always be a villain, in this part it is Brady's stepfather. I hope Brady, along with Ezra and his adoptive parents, will overcome any difficulties or even attempts to hurt Ezra or Brady.

You describe very well the trauma Ezra is still feeling and Brady's influence on his recovery from it, and a wonderful description of both Brady and Ezra's oral sex. I love Ezra and I admire Brady for his approach to this hurt little boy, and for giving him a feeling of friendship and even true love. Greetings from Warsaw, Poland, SissyBoy.

Wspaniale piszesz, tworząc odpowiednią atmosferę i ukazując poszczególne osobowości bohaterów tej historii. Niestety jak zwykle w tym romantycznym świecie, zawsze znajdzie się ten czarny charakter, w tej części to ojczym Bradego. Mam nadzieję że Brady wraz z Ezrą i jego adopcyjnymi rodzicami przezwyciężą poszczególne trudności czy nawet próby skrzywdzenia Ezrę czy Bradego.

Bardzo dobrze opisujesz traumę jaką wciąż odczuwa Ezra oraz wpływ Bradego na jego wychodzenie (wyleczenie - rehabilitację) z niej a przy tym cudowny opis seksu oralnego zarówno Bradego jak i Ezry. Kocham Ezrę i podziwiam Bradego za jego podejście do tego skrzywdzonego małego chłopca, oraz za obdarowanie go uczuciem przyjaźni a nawet prawdziwej miłości. Pozdrawiam z Warszawy, Polska, SissyBoy.

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