All Comments on 'Hiliad's Special Gift Ch. 04'

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Sorry, Masterfuljim

Not gentlemen. Still douchebags.

A2W-I am enjoying the story, my gnashing teeth aside. They guys are just colossal jerks.

spearishspearishover 10 years ago
Letting it slip slightly

Dont be pressured to turf out chapters or the quality will slip .She's used the word "slave" a couple of times when she is in fact a sub and they are not interchangeable.Also Hiliad didn't "bring her there " she sought him out .

It seems silly that when she has no money she wouldn't retrieve her things from Daniel . Still would like to see Daniel come back in to the picture but enjoying it so far .

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

I also love this and im really curious as to y daniel let her go if he loves her. Does hiliad know and just wont tell her .please hurry wth more i love this

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Hmmm

Loving the slow burn to this.

Whoever knew vampires could be such gentlemen lol

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