All Comments on 'Hippie Hills - Naked At the Lake'

by Ed Rogers

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Agree

Love the story. Keep it up!

NudieNomadsNudieNomadsalmost 10 years ago
keep going

great so far please keep writing ,i was expecting mum to show up at any time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Nice

Keep it going. More about bean as well

oldergentleman69oldergentleman69almost 10 years ago
Keep Going

Sounds like a dreamy place. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Don't stop now!

Definitely keep it going.

ballznall60ballznall60almost 10 years ago
By all means...

...please keep this story cumming. As an older ex-Hippie with fond memories of naked summers, I can relive some of my escapades through your writing. That was back in the late 60s and early 70s.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
excellent start!

Your devoted reader wishes to encourage you to continue this lovely tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Very good. Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
bravo

We DO want more of this great adventure. Please

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 10 years ago
+1 vote for MORE please...

I loved it - and I see many directions you could take this story - all of them good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
more please

great story so far.. cant wait to see mom involved if possible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
more please

Would love you to continue this :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
weak ending

really strong story until the ending

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
I wish you had heeded his advice to himself

and paced it a tad slower rather than try to fit so much in so short a story. It would have left lots of room to branch out and explore.

oh well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Surely an obvious continuance is, after many more experiences at Hippie Hills, he returns home to Mom. She would have known what he was to experience, so now can enjoy him as an experienced lover while Dad is away on active duty.

XXMuffDiverXXXXMuffDiverXXalmost 10 years ago
Great Start

Great start that definitely needs to continue and I agree with a previous poster that he needs to get "very experienced" and take good care of Wobbly especially so that Wobbly will tell Mom how much pleasure he can deliver!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Horny funv

I have a friend who lived in a hippie type commune and she has told me similar stories of free love and wanton sex. Wish I had been a part of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Pretty good start

Ending was rushed, and I personally am not into sloppy seconds. But it has great potential and I'm looking forward to reading about the rest of the adventure. More chapters please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More Bean

Woud enjoy reading more about Bean.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

please add more. great story

prav12prav12over 9 years ago
loved it

can't wait to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

would love to hear more of this story. i would especially like to know about the nicknames like lips.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
MORE MORE MORE!!!

This story was fantastic!! Can't wait for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
amazing thats all i can say

amazing thats all i can say, WANT MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Incredible

Can't wait for more!!!!

tugger55tugger55almost 8 years ago
More please

More, more, more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Part 2

Please post part two. I liked the mutual masturbation in the canoe very much#

crazyoldcootcrazyoldcootabout 6 years ago
What a place!

A wish this place was real and I could visit these totally free "Hippies".

HorseSize89HorseSize89over 4 years ago
Add More

He should breed Bean in one chapter and move in with his aunt in another chapter. Introduce anal in another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hippie

Would like to read more and have mom in it

AyhanAyhanabout 1 month ago

It was very wonderful, continue please

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