by Loving50
Easy reading. It is flowing nicely. I think the tension is building nicely.
Perhaps she had another experience in her younger days, prior to her marriage, where she didn't want to, but did.
Thanks Don
Nice to hear! I love knowing that my writing may be causing some tight pants out there. That's the goal of this writer anyway.
But it's not intended for just the men! As I wrote part 3, I literally had to step away from the computer to "take care" of my own horniness. I was successful, btw. Lol
Thanks for the comments.
The narration and story line is very gripping and of-course very much interested to arrive to the right section and sequences. Awaiting for the next part////
And I bet you will keep me that way!
If only I were there when you paused in your typing
The wife in Las Vegas being seduced by a younger stranger was a bit wild. I would have done the same as he did for her, oral sex before penetration; as I love doing that.
As I read these stories, I feel she has the subconscious desire to “walk on the wild side”. Since the character did an extramarital affair once, she has already tastd the forbidden fruit.