by Loving50
No matter how she justified it, she betrayed her husband for better sex..vanilla wasn't enough, love wasn't enough, family wasn't enough....I was afraid you would never bring on any consequences for her betrayal..now perhaps she can share the hurt she has put on her husband. I am not a BTB guy, but cheating is cheating and it should have consequences.
I had a feeling about those windows, but didn't envision the husband seeing/watching/recognizing.
I think his sex life is better, and hers also. I think he'll let her continue.
Thanks Don
The ratcheting sexual tension during the first 4 chapters was well done. The sex, initiated by her, in chapter 5 was very erotic. Now what happens. I totally agree with another comment. I'm not a BTB guy. I like reconciliation; happy endings, but she's totally trashed her marriage. After a very short time, she suffers no guilt. Once the seduction is complete, she joyously & enthusiastically cheats. Often she initiates the encounters, like the window fuck. She decides to just ignore any consequences. There MUST be consequences especially for her creep lover. Please don't let this turn into another spineless, wimp cuckold story.
This story is not based on reality. I'm glad I didn't live it.
Part 6 (the ending) has already been submitted and should post in the next few days.
I know the ending will frustrate some readers and may please others. I've been surprised at the strong response to part 5 both here and in private messages.
I expect part 6 will draw strong responses as well. Positive, negative and in between, all are interesting and welcome.
I walk away from this story with a renewed sense that marriage is fragile, complicated and impossible to judge from the outside.
Thanks for reading.
from our point of view that there are people strongly demanding morals for fictional characters.
Very interesting and gripping story. The fucking sequence is very very nicely described,each word and sentence making a sense-creating a live picture infront.
Excellent....keep it up and make it a little longer with such exciting encounters again and again.
I loved the ending, to be honest... sometimes, you are jolted from your perfect escape from reality... can't wait to get to the last part now...