All Comments on 'His Homecoming'

I found the story well written, and kept me on the edsge of not knowing what would happen next. Thank you godigurl I hope the success of this story will inspire you to more of the same.

Night Owl

Nice, mellow flow from one part to the next... good setting of the sub's character with the opening scenes, too. *s* Hot where it should have been,though. Nice work. i would say do a little more work around keeping in the same tense consistently. *s* Other than that, good job! *s* Keep it up.

wow Godi!!!!! I'm very impressed. I enjoyed it very much. Felt like i was w/ you there. *claps* i can't wait for the next story.

-starry

Nice job !! You capture the feeling of a submissive's anticipation quite well. Your pacing works and the details are well thought out. Thanks for sharing it !!