All Comments on 'His Little Princess Pt. 01'

I loved it, aside from a few spelling/grammatical errors it was perfect.

I adore daddy/daughter role play and thought you wrote a good story. Got a great laugh at one mistake that I've just gotta mention. At one point, Princess was excited at she 'quacked'... too funny....obviously it was meant to be 'quaked', and i know it, but still had to giggle at that one!! Keep up the good work, maybe just proof read a little slower next time... LOL!! ;-)

Your story is great!! Please write more!!