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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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please continue this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
YUMMY

What a tantalizing start! I hope you post Chap 2 soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
my comment

Well what happened next u left us all hanging

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Something missing

The way it is written, there is only one conclusion: There is more supposed to come. But I could't find it. Did you skip this idea ? If yes, you shouldn't have.

It was mouth watering, but then you did not provide any water !

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago

Good but unfinished.

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