by Alan D
An excellent effort. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the characters.
An excellent 2nd chapter. Well written and throughly enjoyable - lucky John!! Looking forward to the third instalment already.
Many thanks! In 8 chapters you have taken 4 young impressionable (and admitedly very 'fit') girls from a kind of innocence with a broken car, lost in the woods scenario,to 4 very sexily aware young women, still learning about their bodies, - so presumably further chapters can roll! Many thanks from a grateful girl at home with her 'rabbit' while boyfriend is surfin'. wait 'til he gets back..............
This story is fuckin' great! The author brings every man's fantasy into the story. If only I had as much endurance as John.
Hooterhunter
Can't wait for "Hobson's Choice Ch. 03".
Excellent and tasty !
Please continue.
I read the last chapter first as it was what came up randomly, but then just had to go and start at the beginning to get the whole story. It was very hot, and I believe my vibrator is worn right out now :) would love to do something like that myself!