All Comments on 'Hold Me Down'

or not. But it's--2:00 AM. I just checked my cell, and too late to get stuff--I don't really have whatever but this story makes me feel like I do.

Weird sleep patterns can make one--unsure of one's

just get your sleep confused enough and--

I'm falling straight into bed--with the white noise I love of the fan--I'll get back to this story tomorrow

No wonder some young (and older?) Japanese females like those romance comics with two guys.

TWO guys! Two dicks! Four nipples! And etc.

Guy luv! Kissing (& etc. !!)

Some girls like to watch.

An play

So she set it up so he could have his dick sucked? Is he in love with the guy the girl or both? Rubbed he pussy on one guy's cock getting off thru her panties no less, the the other guy fingers her pussy thru her panties while he gets a blow job from the other guy she never gets a dick or finger in her pussy!! Pretty fucked up!

Really charming. Thanks for writing it!

Well written and with an amazing capacity to describe the situation and the thoughts of the characters without being too complex.

I havent read such a good story in years. I am bi and the way the characters complement and how the climax of the story builds is just hot and exiting.

I joined this site just to be able to comment and put 5 stars on it.