All Comments on 'Holding It For Anal Ramming'

Great story, but of she can't hold her batter...

Get an editor.

A very sexy story

That was a fantastic story! I love doing this sort of thing for real with the missus...

Very hot story but all the errors really do take away from the flow (pun sort of intended.) PLEASE clean this up so we can enjoy it undistracted.

Distracting errors - needs better editing (n/t)

I agree, it's a very hot story, but you need to sort out spelling and grammar, it drags it down.

I like the concept. Please do consider getting an editor, though. If your pussy has mussels you need to see a doctor, pronto!

while i personally don't want to drink urine,to each his own.

i've read several stories that you have written,enjoying them all. your have a varied imagination.thanks.

Loved it. Reading your story set my whole body on fire with desire! Yeah!

Do love this subject matter and would lke to see you write more.

Shutter? That's what covers a window. Chase lounge? You freakin' dumbass.