All Comments on 'Holiday Encounter Ch. 03'

Just a note to say how much I enjoyed your story. I love that you take your time, building up both characters and relationships so each stage of your story and all your character's actions are very belivable. Both Ann and Steven are well enough written that I cared about them and what happened to them. I wrung my hands when she told him she was falling in love and felt fear for them. His nonchalance made me want to yell at him to watch himself! <g>.

The sex was hot, the emotions vivid and the story intriguing. Where so many of the stories in the loving wifes section are filled with caricatures and situations that are unbelievable, you have written a great story with all the normal components for a wife sharing story, but in a very realistic way. Really good job. Keep writing, I look forward to more or your story!

-Francis_Toliver

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Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

And she shared me and it was the best times of our life. We need a variety at times. I loved fucking her moments after another man had cum in her.

Wish it had a new ch4, 5 and so on

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved