All Comments on 'Holiday Fun Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Goose and Gander--Equality

Good writing. The next chapter will be very interesting.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A nice twist to the story

He had his fun and didn't think about what Dan was up to, and that seems to be fucking his wife.

A good erotic story, thanks

rguernsrguernsabout 8 years ago
Quite the change...

Well that took a turn... Definitely not how I thought this was going.

AlwaysAndForever82AlwaysAndForever82about 2 months ago

sounds like Dan raped his wife because she was passed out drunk. at least the other coupling was consensual.

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