All Comments on 'Home Alone'

by SmashFitzgerald

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story

I can't wait to read more from you. Very nice indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not only was this story majorly hot....

....but I also loved the ending when they passed out togeather.

Very very nice!

Just_A_Fuck_HoleJust_A_Fuck_Holeabout 11 years ago
Well done.

Excellently written. Very well done. I hope we see more of this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow

I -loved- this. Please, submit more. This was.. EXCELLENT. Very well done!

lazralazraabout 11 years ago
Loved it

A few small errors, but otherwise... Wow. I love the perspective this was written in. Very chilling. I was greatly disappointed to see this is your only submission thus far. Please, continue the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You??????????

Why should the word 'YOU' be used for a person????? I think it is stupid.

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