by SmashFitzgerald
Why should the word 'YOU' be used for a person????? I think it is stupid.
A few small errors, but otherwise... Wow. I love the perspective this was written in. Very chilling. I was greatly disappointed to see this is your only submission thus far. Please, continue the great writing.
I -loved- this. Please, submit more. This was.. EXCELLENT. Very well done!
Excellently written. Very well done. I hope we see more of this story line.
....but I also loved the ending when they passed out togeather.
Very very nice!