All Comments on 'Home Alone Ch. 01'

Please don't bother with chapter 2.

WHILE I READ YOUR STORY I DID NOT LIKE IT..I HAVE NOTHING AGAINST MOST SEXUAL ACTIVITIES. HOWEVER I DON'T LIKE: CHILD PRON,NOR DO I LIKE ANY HARD CORE RAPE STORIES..YES YOU HAVE TALENT.. SO PLEASE REDIRECT YOUR STORY LINE...

Maybe the other two folks didnt like the story, but I really did enjoy it and am looking forward to the second chapter.

there are several ways that I see this story going.... I hope that you do finish it!

Dont listen to the person who does not like hard PRON. This was a good non consent story and if someone doesnt like rape stories they probably shouldnt read a non consent story. The problem is theirs not yours so keep writing

please don't make us wait to long for chapter 2.

please please write the next chapter i love this

please write more. love this story

Sexy and enticing. I really hope to see more of this.

Please continue. Great work!

I agree with the others, you should write more chapters. I really like how you started out the story....very sexy :P

I wonder if this intruder ends up being the preacher's son. That really would be hot!!!