All Comments on 'Home Alone Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Room for improvement.

What were you trying to prove with this story ? Too short, no substance, no plot, in other words, a waste of space. A let down after Chapter 1. Come on, you can do better.

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