All Comments on 'Home for the Holiday Ch. 02'

You're killing me, slowly... That must be your intention. Please continue soon.

You're back! A nice slow buildup, just your specialty. Don't stop writing - you are particularly skilled. Pink Pearl remains one of my top 5 stories on lit...

and that's a great thing!

You have no idea how much you were missed. This is a great piece of erotica. You make me love teasing.

I am SO glad to see your stories again. They're amazing!

This chapter is a little slow on the up-take. Kind of like slow running water--you eventually get the amount you want, but the waiting is treacherous and tedious!!

Not too much to offer "at this stop", but the blooming and budding foreplay is showing promise!

Rachel has not mentioned what her husband is up to, working, out with the boys on the golf course, etc.?? Hopefully the dickhead can stay in the shadows and be a non-entity!!

Love the slow build-up