All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 03 Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A Thundering Plot Line

It continues to evolve and becomes more conflicted, more elaborate and more intriguing....all of which means that it is growing more exciting and enjoyable. So, there will be a new family in the next part and Frank shows up sometime at the end, hmmmm? Is the secret baby he pumped into his Mom, Ellen, part of this family and he shows up when he learns of it? I know you must have that baby hiding somewhere. I sound overly enthusiastic, but I am really into this story. I'm glad there is a part ten but its too bad we have to wait for spring for the next part. AnHoa Rifleman

jdnunyerjdnunyerover 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks, as always, for the interest, AnHoa Rifleman.

The family we meet in the next part is not related to Frank, or any of the Orwins. The two narratives will tie together in the end, but initially, there won't really be any connection. But you may find an answer to your question in the final chapter of Part Three...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
I think Frank needs to think more about how to fight than of fucking

Seems the boy has picked up another enemy and this one could cause him some real harm.

A very good chapter, full of both violence and sex.

You can't hardly top that.

Thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
just a question

do your demons crave sex like vampire do blood? (psychologically if not physically?)

this dove tails with Digdaddy's observation because they have sex when they should learn to fight, they have sex when they should be planning, they have sex when they should be honest with themselves and those around them. i cant help feel that that so much of this world's conflicts come from the fact nobody talks to anyone....they fuck them

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

Good question, anon. Yes, they crave sex. They don't need it to survive, as vampires do blood, but it's hard for them to ignore the cravings.

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