by jdnunyer
I liked the other chapters for the ability to sink into the head of the main guy. This will be harder. Good to see you back.
Sorry the female POV isn't working so well for you, anon. I wanted to try something a little different for Winter. I hope other aspects of the story make up for it.
I like the change to a female lead in Winter. I kept wondering what new aspecg you would bring for the next 3 parts. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story. Also, nice end with Frank's scene. I didn't expect to see hi back so soon.
-Myers