by jdnunyer
I like the change to a female lead in Winter. I kept wondering what new aspecg you would bring for the next 3 parts. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story. Also, nice end with Frank's scene. I didn't expect to see hi back so soon.
-Myers
Sorry the female POV isn't working so well for you, anon. I wanted to try something a little different for Winter. I hope other aspects of the story make up for it.
I liked the other chapters for the ability to sink into the head of the main guy. This will be harder. Good to see you back.