All Comments on 'Homeless & Found'

Mechanically, the story had some weaknesses, but it made it stronger. It feels a little too real.

Good stuff. Looking forward to the next installment. I agree with the previous commenter that it feals very real, but I vew that as a strength, not a weakness. Keep up the good work...

...story, real development rather than the usual straight into sex stuff, love to see how the plot grows.

This is a good start to what seems to be an interesting storyline. I enjoyed it but at times you seemed almost rushed to get your point and your story across. This made it seem like you are reading a report and not a story times. But Please don't take that to mean anything bad because it was a good start I just was trying to offer some constructive critism. Please continue with the story

An interesting start I hope that is not going to turn into one of those ecofreak goodie-goodies tales.

More description of the appearance of the characters are needed at present they are steriotypes

I am looking forward to the next installment.

I think this will be an engrossing story and I eagerly

will watch for the other chapters

Great start to a potentially absorbing plot. Good characters: very real. The only suggestion I can make is the same as one of the previous comments. Don't be afraid to use more words. Fill out the action and characters with a little more detail. I can't imagine anyone getting bored reading this. Good work!

it's nice to read something that takes time to develop. vevy nice

It was very nice. A bit of an interesting way of writing, atleast not common for this site.

Only complaint, is it seems the end was rushed. Just felt abit ackward.

Great story, but some vaguely racist undertones that made me feel uncomfortable. They don't cut your hand off for theft in the West Indies....check your facts before making statements like this. But as I said, great story.

Loved the story, I really think there is definite room to expand the themes and characters you have brought to play in this story. Hope to see more soon

Nice tempo until the last couple paragraphs. Wondering if you are going to get back to your profile and the rest of the story. As the parent of an autistic child I'm concerned that rather than SSC this relationship will be a case of someone taking advantage of another...

Please do contuie this story it has a very good story line.

great storie please i would love to see how the storie progresses

This story touched me deep down! This sort of stories should not be confined to Literotica readers only.It should be a-must-read part of the curriculum of all school/college going young folks.Human values/dignity for all(especially more so for physically challenged ones/"children of a lesser God").regards to all.

that I read the story because I like the photo of the author. She's so sweet. Then I found I liked the way the story was heading. But why stop there, what happened to the "to be continued..."

God forbid, not something happened to the sweet author, I hope?

What happend to the to be continued i love the story please don't stop

sadly missed.

ughh what a cliffhanger... :(

Good story 24 yrs no completion though?

Amazing start to the story hope to read more some day...