All Comments on 'Honey Trap'

The good part was the sex scenes were pretty decent and the concept is interesting, but my problem was that I would've liked to have gotten more into Jacobsen's head about how he felt sucking another guy off and such. That and it took me a while to get use to the shifting between the trainer and his mark.

This idea has potential. I had some difficulty following the narrative, mostly third person some second. The reason for the training was clear but the shifting from one character to the other as far as who was taking the lead was confusing. This needs work to make it flow more smoothly but I absolutely loved the ending, nice!