by mintabal3239
is as subhumanly deviant as your insinuation of honouring such a marriage portrayed here by you. The pitiful wimp was so jaded he only got it up with her depraved cuckolding which he sickly desired. A marriage made in a scummy pit of depressing soridness. How sweetly distorted and twisted!
Why? Do you waste your time and talent for the few jaded sicko's like the husband who needs a life and some lifelike reality - perhaps it's too late for them as well eh?
Hopefully not for you!
keep writing don't get discouraged by bad comments
by a fellow Indian
Be discouraged by the fact that you have a mind which can dream up such a story
I thought I was reading another uninteresting story by another no mind blogger on here named sexxy vixen, but instead there is another one of you on here!
There was nothing interesting in what you came up with and you switched first person gender! Plus you need a spell check.
Go back to sweating or whatever Indians do while waiting for the monsoon.
DON?T YOU GET BORED OF YOUR FUCKING NEVER ENDING TOTALLY UNINTERESTING REPETITIVE DRIVEL??? NO_ONE GIVES A FUCK WHAT YOU THINK YOU FUCKING MORON: YAAAAAAAAAAAWN:
NOT FOR. If you truly follow your mindset you can never be alone. TK U MLJ LV NV