All Comments on 'Hooterz Ch. 01'

It was ok until the whole story stared over in the middle of the sex scene. Other than that, it was ok.

Wow, you must of been out of it or something, this story is really messed up. I can't believe you submitted something like this. What a bummer

I love a story about breasts but this sucked. From saying I to he and her and a full cup????? I know english might not be your first language but you really need to get a editor before you ATTEMPT to write the second part. Even then I still probably won't bother reading it.

Please don't write any more stories unless you learn basic grammar, tense, person, and...what the Hell with starting over?

StopStopStop!

if u did not repeat it it would have been a nice short story but the repation just fucked it right up