All Comments on 'Hot Barber Ch. 01'

I reached the enthralling part in this epic where the author realised,that the hairdresser,not barber,actually lived next door to him.Sorry to say,the plot,as well as the literary prowess leave a lot to be desired.This is not a debut submission,may i suggest that you enlist the services of an editor,or, if you have one make sure he is literate in the english grammar..

not anon uk andyd46