All Comments on 'Hot Blooded 02'

I love it

You made a great job. Wunderful Story.

Freddy

MaitreNuit, you have hard worked this time, A lot of storys and all perfectly written.

Go on.

I like it much.

Herbstblume

Horny. Will be there a part 3?

I like your style.

Keep on writing,

LW

The 3rd and last part should be out by tomorrow or latest sunday. Enjoy the read.

MaitreNuit

People who's native language isn't English

that read this are praising your work.

People that speak and read only in proper English

see this as a mess. Please for the love God get

an editor from the western hemisphere of the planet..

I've seen a lot messier shit from native speakers. You've done quite a good job. Keep on writing like this. I really like your stories.

So passionate and gentle. You let us really dive into your character's souls

I've read thousands of stories and this one is good forget all those jerks who want perfect gramer the story is solid you're not writing a college entrance essay so screw the nay sayers