by MaitreNuit
I've read thousands of stories and this one is good forget all those jerks who want perfect gramer the story is solid you're not writing a college entrance essay so screw the nay sayers
So passionate and gentle. You let us really dive into your character's souls
I've seen a lot messier shit from native speakers. You've done quite a good job. Keep on writing like this. I really like your stories.
People who's native language isn't English
that read this are praising your work.
People that speak and read only in proper English
see this as a mess. Please for the love God get
an editor from the western hemisphere of the planet..
The 3rd and last part should be out by tomorrow or latest sunday. Enjoy the read.
MaitreNuit
MaitreNuit, you have hard worked this time, A lot of storys and all perfectly written.
Go on.
I like it much.
Herbstblume