All Comments on 'Hot Fun with a Stranger'

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 5 years ago
Sexy hot and incredible

Loved the story, the characters, they are sexually molten. Love to see if Damien wins her over in the sequel. But you give great detail I got sucked into the story right away. Keep up the great story telling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good One

Love this author. You write such great hot stories. Please keep them coming. This one was a winner!!! So Good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
BLOODY HELL!

just finished reading it and im as hot as a furnace..going to get me some alone time. Great Job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow!!! So Fucking Hot!!!!!

Fantastic Story! Loved the Heat!!! Great Characters! Need to read more on these two --- Please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

As good as it gets on this site, a real story, hot as hell, English as a first language and well expressed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story!

Loved it! Just a couple of continuity details threw it off for me...

1. Balls don't slap against arses when being taken from behind.

2. A visual break between the driving away scene and the office scene would have been appreciated (******) i was a little thrown by the flow into something completely different

3. He says he didn't even catch her name. But "full name" or "last name" would be more appropriate as he did ask for and received her (first) name when they were having the hottest sex i've read in a while.

Love your writing and the details.. which is why it stood out when there were some incongruencies. Would love to read more about these two beyond chapter 2 ;) which i'm heading to now. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loved This! So Hot!

Please write more on these two.

kinkygeezerkinkygeezeralmost 5 years ago
Wow! So Hot!

Fantastic story. And so damn hot. What a concept!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Such A Good Story

I hope there is more to come on these two. They are so good together, make it a series.

AKajiraAKajiraabout 3 years ago

Loved it !!

Now I just need to go out tonight and find my own Damian. Who doesn't love a man in uniform :)

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years agoAuthor

Still got more to come on this story. Glad you're enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Got too consensual for my personal kinks, but you write well.

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