All Comments on 'Hot Night Ch. 01'

Wish I were him. Another hot, sexy story. Keep it up

I liked the more mature age aspect of this one,,, not every story should have a focus of young kids.

Good job, in fact, very good job.

Perhaps this one will have a follow on chapter ?

The only thing I hate is having to wait for 02!!

These two could get far hotter than the weather - I hope!

Lukas

I wish there were more chapters.

good but the ages don't add up unless she just got divorced now that would have made her 19 when she got married but if she got divorced before he moved in four years ago then she would have been 15 when she got married not very clear you need to give better details

it is obvious that you only write for yourself and don't really care if the readers like it since you don't seem to be able to finish a story and a good writer that cared about the readers would do his best to finish every story and not leave the readers hanging

The time doesn't work out your saying the oldest she could be when she married was 15 as they divorced after 20 years and her and her brother lived together for 4 39-24=15

The story is great as far as it goes. Let's have more character development and then go for a sequel or two. At least make them more than single page "jerk" stories as you are a better writer than that.