All Comments on 'Hot, Sweet, & Sticky'

The sex itself had some great potential but was jarred by the switching of tenses ("she" to "you"). There was a couple of points where I thought the wife had brought a friend.

great sexy story...but the switch from third ro first person has made it a difficult read.

This is a great story. A very well written piece, thats very descriptive, like all erotic stories should be. My one and only criticism unfortunately, is the the few mistakes at the end. I think they were only grammatical ones, but a little confusing when the text reads from 'her', 'she', and from 'your', 'you'. Otherwise a very good, horny read.

both choices are as strange as the other

Why does the story keep shifting from first person to second person?