All Comments on 'Hot Teacher Enslaved Ch. 01'

Extremely hot, cant wait for more. However, it could be better if there are some more details on the sex scene.

great writing Bad keep it going

I normally do not write comments, but I must say I really liked this story a lot. I wish there was more action and description. Please write more.

Good start, but two things. First, please proof read before posting. His tits? That's an easy one. Nothing kills a good hard-on like reading stupid, easily corrected mistakes. Second, slow down. Fill in the details. You set us up to read about this bitch getting gang fucked and then when it's time for her to put out, you give us three or four lines telling us she was banged and dropped in the park. Tell us how she felt when the first cock invaded her cunt. Tell us how she felt getting her ass pumped while a cock strangled her. Let us know what she thought as several cocks each pumped cum into her body and how the whore quivered with delight over being used. Don't just blue ball us! Like I said, good start, but now go back and give us something really worth reading.

Rough, animalistic, arousing ....