All Comments on 'House Sitting Desdemonas'

I didn't like this story because the narrative kept changing from one person to another... with no indication... had to figure who was telling each section. Really irritating... the ideas were good though

enhanced the interest in the story. One minor typo - you meant to say 'hand' but left out the 'h'; 'and' was a bit confusing.

Clever story - all things considered! Thanks!